Over the past few weeks we have been part of the 'Get NZ writing' poetry project. This project aimed to get 96,000 poems written across NZ! We were sent a tin with objects in it and we used one of these objects to write poems here is my poem.
Hi jack, I can see you have worked hard on this poem and it describes the army lady pretty well. Next time you could add what her face looks like, you could also add what she is wearing.
Hi Jack. Well done for writing your Get NZ Writing Poem. My favourite line is, 'Ferocious mini war angry' as these are all strong words. Keep working on using 'sticky' descriptive words in your writing. Well done.
Hi jack, I can see you have worked hard on this poem and it describes the army lady pretty well. Next time you could add what her face looks like, you could also add what she is wearing.
ReplyDeleteHey Jack, that's a lot of descriptive words! Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Jack. Well done for writing your Get NZ Writing Poem. My favourite line is, 'Ferocious mini war angry' as these are all strong words. Keep working on using 'sticky' descriptive words in your writing. Well done.
ReplyDelete