Tuesday 7 August 2018

Plight of the sea Turtles

7 comments:

  1. Hi Jack,
    My name is nuradiin i got to Owairaka District School. I really like your persuasive poem and telling the world stop littering in the ocean. But you should focus on putting full stop.

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    1. Hi its Jack,
      Thank you for your comment. Next time I'll will put the full stops in the right places.

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  2. Hi Jack nice work from kade

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    1. Thank you for your comment.

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  3. Hello Jack it's Noah here, you have done a good job with your work and I did not know that turtles thought that plastic bags are jelly fish.

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    1. Thank you for your comment Noah
      Turtles think that they are jelly fish because of the shape of the bag the handles are the stingers and the body is the actual part of the bag.

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  4. Hi you were very specific on your words. Good job. I'm sure people will understand that we need to stop throwing trash in the sea.

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.