Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
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Kia ora Jack, Charlotte here from the Summer Learning Journey team. Wow, I love your version of the Big Ben image! I like how the yellow contrasts with the brown background. It looks very stylistic. Ka pa! I also really like the strong colours you used for your watermelon picture. I notice your goal is to improve your artwork - is that something you hope to do over the summer? I would love to be better at art too. Ngā mihi, Charlotte
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Kia ora Jack, Charlotte here from the Summer Learning Journey team.
ReplyDeleteWow, I love your version of the Big Ben image! I like how the yellow contrasts with the brown background. It looks very stylistic. Ka pa!
I also really like the strong colours you used for your watermelon picture.
I notice your goal is to improve your artwork - is that something you hope to do over the summer? I would love to be better at art too.
Ngā mihi,
Charlotte