Writing-Abandoned Places

Our learning goals are to:

-write a description, using powerful words and phrases

-include some Te Reo Māori

-carefully check that our sentences make sense and have correct punctuation and spelling.

Choose one of the above images to prompt a piece of descriptive writing

Its was the year of 3094 and everything was peaceful and calm in the city until the Brotherhood threatened to drop a nuke on our innocent people. I looked up and there was a big red rough blimp that said the Brotherhood rules you all. After years of preparing they threatened us once more and said “OOOHHHHHH what does this button do.” And then BBBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPP.

This was the end we all thought.

Everyone was running around and screaming help. I had to help them. I ran as fast as I could to them and pushed them into the safety bunker. The nuke came down and it came down hard. During the explosion I was blinded. After the light was gone I could see again but the only thing I could see was  dark, gloomy and bland. The Brotherhood was coming so I hid inside the building closest to me.

Inside it was rough and rocky and smelt like rats…                          The Brotherhood were playing music, freaky music. Like music that would have been from the movie IT. They were coming in close on the two huge grey rocky buildings. The brotherhood found me.

They shot and shot but they missed and

they made a rocky hole in the wall that had a ring of fiery flames around that edge of the hole. I looked through the hole in the rocky wall and said, “Holy crap.” I turned around and shot and shot. I hit them all and the war was won or so we thought…